Romeo and Juliet

A l'occasion d'un travail sur une ré-écritude du célèbre mythe de Roméo et Juliet, les élèves de 3°2Dutilleux, ont écrit leur propre scène du balcon.

 

Charles B., Denis G., Enzo P.

Then Romeo left the nightclub whose name was Flamingo Casino. During this party, Romeo had met Juliet, he had talked to her and he had kissed her. Juliet missed Romeo even though they had just known each other one night. Juliet was on her balcony, Romeo climbed over the wall and he went in the garden of the Capulets below the balcony of Juliet.
"Yes, it was a magical kiss", Romeo said.
"If only you could change your name Romeao, I would marry you right away", Juliet retorted.
"My princess, If I could change my name into yours, I wouldn't hesitate because I love you Juliet", Romeo exclaimed.
"I love you too. But, our love is meant to fail beacause of the rivalry between our two families", Juliet remarked.
"Go far from here to leave our love peaceful. We will have no worries to love freely. Come, we shall leave now Juliet", Romeo snapped.
"Sorry, my handsome knight, I cannot leave because I love my family. Maybe one day, we will achieve this dream", Juliet whispered.
"Yes, maybe one day...", Romeo proposed.
Romeo left the garden, head down, alone and sad.
"Romeo! Come and kiss me, my prince!", Juliet shouted.
Suddenly, Romeo ran to the balcony, He climbed overt the wall to go up, and he kissed Juliet.

Castro L., Chloé M.

Romeo and Juliet were in a casino in Las Vegas . Romeo was in the yard of the casino and Juliet was on a balcony , Romeo saw her , he approached her .
Romeo slowly went hiding , behind a tree . Then , he continued watching Juliet . He heard noises and screams . Suddenly , a bandit and a vigilant ran. Romeo was afraid of having been discovered by a Capulet . So he went hiding behind a car . When everything became calm again , Romeo returned under the balcony . He heard Juliet who was speaking .

<< Oh Romeo , why are you a Montague ? If you love me , give me your name and I will be yours. >>, Juliet said .
<< You know a name is nothing but a name, it is not a person . Our names don't forbid our love. >>,Romeo answered .

Finally , Romeo climbed up on the tree in order to go on the balcony . When he arrived on the balcony near Juliet , he took her hand and he kissed her .

Y. Vairon, Alexandre B., Antoine L.

Juliet left the night-club with Ty "tiger" balt. They went to the public park. Romeo followed them silently.

"The night is cold" Juliet said.
"Take my coat" Ty answered.
They heard a strange noise which was coming from the opposite side. Ty ran in the direction of the noise. As Ty was leaving, Romeo joined Juliet.
"Don't scream ! It's me ", he whispered.
"Who is it ?"
"It's me Romeo."
"What are you doing here ?", Juliet asked. "If Ty sees you , he will kill you" Juliet exclaimed
"I prefer dying after having seen you a last time."
"I am a Montague , you are a Capulet, however our love is possible."
"I love you too but I don't want to die because of my family.", Juliet said desperately.

"I'm ready to leave my family.", Romeo maintened.
Romeo ran away because Ty was coming back.
"That was nothing.", Ty said.
They finished their walk and came back to the Capulets' house.

L.Alleau, Clémentine C, Mickaël V.

After the party, Romeo decided to climb the wall of the Capulet's garden on order to see Juliet again and He hid behind a bush. He saw Juliet on the balcony of her bedroom.
"This party was really unforgettable. Why is Romeo a Montague?" ,Juliet wondered.
"Juliet! My name doesn't mean anything.",Romeo maintained.
"Romeo? What are you doing here? If my parents see you here, you will die." ,she exclaimed.
"I'm here in order to see you. your parents won't succeed in stopping my love for you. Juliet, you are the star which brightens my heart.", Romeo said.
"Romeo our love is similar to a rose, it seems beautiful but it is in reality impossible because Romeo, My Rome you are a Montague.", she exclaimed.

"Believe me Juliet , my love for you is very sincere . Our names aren't important because our love is amazing . Our parents will not stop us." , Romeo maintained.
They heard a noise coming from the corridor .
" Romeo I heard a noise . Flee rapidly before they find you " , Juliet whispered .
" I will not leave." , Romeo said.
" Romeo leave ! If you want to , we will meet again on Monday at the warehouse.", Juliet maintained .
" Okay , I miss you " , he said .
Romeo left .


Lisa B., Lilas C.; Lou M.

After the bal, Romeo met Juliet in her garden near the swimming-pool.

"Oh Juliet, Juliet... I rise again to your presence", Romeo whispered.
"Your smile dazzles my eyes" he said.

In front of the swimming-pool, Juliet who thought she was alone, got on insight of Romeo.
"Romeo! My sweet Romeo! What are you doing here? You are crazy !" Juliet exclaimed.
"Yes my dear ! I am crazy about you !" Romeo said.
"Oh my angel, your revelation turn my heart upside down...", she said.
"Me too, and your name doesn't mean much.", Romeo replied.
"But I am already devoted to a person.", Juliet moaned.
"What? Do you love him?", Romeo asked.
"No, my parents decided it for me.", she said.

"Who is he?"

"A wealthy prince", Juliet sighed.

"It's bad news... Our love story is impossible", Romeo answered. "Yes, but I love you so much".

Marco L., Mathis P,

Romeo was in the Capulet's garden after the party under the windows of Juliet's appartment. He was talking alone, he thought about Juliet.

"I want you. I want you love. ", he said.

"Oh Romeo ! You brighten my life ! I just have a child like life without you. What do you expect from me ?", she asked Romeo.

"What you wish as long as I can shower you with my love !", Romeo exclaimed.

"Yes , I want ... But I think it's not possible because my parents want me to marry Elvis.", Juliet turned to go, but Romeo took her hand. Romeo looked at her . He kissed her .

"Why me ?", Juliet said. "You have many qualities which I like.", Romeo explained. He kissed her again. She turned red.

"You are so beautiful and very convincing.", Juliet said.

"You too... Romeo I love you and I want you."

Manon D., Witoria M-D.

Romeo wanted to talk to Juliet but they had to hide because theirs families kept quarrelling. At the end of the party, Juliet woke up in her bedroom. After a few minutes, Juliet sat on a bench and she could hear Romeo speaking alone. Romeo did not know that Juliet could not hear him. He talked to Juliet, he was trying to express his love but he was talking alone. Juliet approched the balcony and started talking to Romeo.
" My beautiful Romeo, oh Romeo, why are you Montague? " Juliet asked.
" Oh Juliet my love, I don't know why I'm a Montague, but is my name important for love? ", he answered.
" No, it isn't but our families hate each other. "
" We will face this problem together! ", Romeo snapped.
After this conversation, Juliet returned to her room and she went home with Romeo.

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